Hello Freedom and Nature,

Welcome to writing.com!

I saw your poem in the "Please Review" section and, because the title intrigued me, I clicked to read.

The first part of your poem made me feel happy and free.
The second part made me feel a bit sad but also made me appreciate freedom just a bit more. So, very well done in evoking emotions!

You also created some clear images. Your poem's rhyming complemented the message. I didn't spot any errors of any kind.

You did a great job! I enjoyed reading it and thank you for posting it.

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler

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