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The Fork in the Road  [E]
Which path to take: narrow or wide?
by Genipher
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!
It's been a pleasure to review your poem "The Fork in the Road"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

*BurstP* First Impression: A very good thoughtful piece . I especially like the rhyming scheme of this poem. It felt so melodious and rhythmic in my head.

*BurstP* The poem: I like the images you have painted here. I like how each line breaks. It flowed beautifully flowed with your crafted words.
I really liked some of the phrases play, discontent and scratches, " earthly goal " greedy gain of goodies " the fork in the road ".

*BurstP* Favorite lines:
“for I had pondered the narrow
but chose to carry my own load
and left behind, forever
the fork in the road”

*BurstP* Final thought: In conclusion, I think you wrote a good poem with a good message Thanks for sharing.

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

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