What a delightful poem. I love how you got the southern/oaky accent down so well. I could hear the poem in my head, with a voice like an ex relative in Oklahoma. Without even a dropped 'g' I figured it out fast with the lemon cut out of ade. lol

- if I'm ain't getting paid?- I'd not heard 'I'm' an 'aint' put together before. It was interesting.

who's gonna buy it from me.-since this is a question, I think a question mark is called for here.

I love the twist on the last line in the second verse.

I love the last verse. A very suck it up and deal with it attitude.

I keep falling asleep as I type. Please forgive the typos.

Your poem read well, flowed well, and rhymed.
Very good!
Love, LinnAnn