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 Burning Highway  [E]
Just an experiment in ending each line with a long "A" sound. Not necessarily rhyming.
by BlizzardBlitzer
Review of Burning Highway  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Burning Highway"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression:Beautiful poem. Cleverly done each line with a long "A" sound

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: This poem is beautiful and flows beautifully with your crafted words. Your rhyming scheme a,a,a,a makes this poem more interesting.

*Butterflyb* Favorite lines:
"And I walk not in the light of day
But in the shadows of death and decay
While you sit on high to say
My sentence has lead you astray"

*Cut* Suggestions:I didn’t find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I appreciate the way you wrote this.

Thanks for sharing. Keep Writing!

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