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Review of Weighty Worries?  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Humorous poem. I like the concept. So many people are struggling to be slim. Because society praises weight loss. It causes eating disorder like bulimic disease.

The voice of the poem is the strength for me. I like the way you crafted the words in this poem. The flow is smooth. The words are very true. It's real to life, not to mention amusing.

My favorite lines
“So pals better be about ill-
health precautious
rather than being overly
so weight-conscious.”

I enjoyed reading your poems. Your poem has good message. Thanks for sharing. Have a good day!

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