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Reflections Revealed  [E]
Autumnal beauty casts a perfect reflection upon the waters ... Life cycles
by Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Web!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Reflections Revealed"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

So enchanted poem! I like the beauty of autumn you have painted here. I could feel the sound and color of this poem.

A poem is soul breathing. Its flows beautifully with your crafted words. I like the phrases play “a sprinkle of deciduous hardwoods” “pencil-like sentries of evergreen” “radiate their sun-lit majesty.” All the natural things blended together create a vibrant nature scene.

I like how each line breaks. Rhyming makes this poem more interesting and makes the rhythm faster, happier. I like the images.

It seems you felt as you are a part of nature when you wrote this. The way you wrote keeps me reading it to the end.

Wonderful poem. Thank for sharing!

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