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Review #4401144
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 Drinking  [18+]
A drinking poem
by Chris Breva
Review of Drinking  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your cautionary poem about drinking.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Far from celebrating drinking this fine poem warns of of what it can lead to. When I was younger, I enjoyed drinking, but there was really no point to it. All it did was, as you said, make me feel bad.
Kids think it gives them the nerve to do things they wouldn't ordinarily do, I guess. False bravery or something like it.

Your rhyme was good and you definitely get your point across.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part hits home:

"Why drink like we do
We know we're sick when we're through
It makes so little sense
We know there will be recompense."

I guess we all learn that sooner or later or else we die an early death from alcohol abuse.

Good to really be ourselves and enjoy life sober, I reckon.

Good work!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at at Time in 2018! *Cow**Grass* *Tulipv*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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