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 | Missed Opportunity  [E] Opportunity eludes the hesitant soul  |
| (4.5)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Missed Opportunity Description: Opportunity eludes the hesitant soul Wonder what is being missed?  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: The descriptions of the trail and surrounding environment presented a very good picture of what was viewed by both characters. The feelings about this venture were well explained and I could imagine vividly what was happening. Sharing the thoughts, reactions, and feelings of the characters gave great insight to the story and about who these people were. plot: The scene and characters were nicely depicted and presented so that the story could be told with the reader knowledgeable about all aspects of the situation and people. For me the fact that there was hesitation about allowing someone to enter into the persons special place/situation, this alone is a changing factor as the story showed. Rhythm: The reading experience for this story was for a leisurely activity which worked well with the story presentation. It moved nicely and I didn't feel rushed nor held back.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: He could still could hear her as she drags her flip-flops against the trail. "could" twice  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: I enjoyed the story and had a good reading experience so will read something you write again in the future. Thank you very much for sharing your word art with me and for the privilege of reviewing for you. 'Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 03/24/2018 @ 2:42am EDT