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Title:
Just Do It Just do what I wonder
Description:
A fresh start - fantasies of a lonely man.
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What and why:
I certainly did not see that ending coming. Nice twist from lonely heart missing wife kinda guy to murderer.

plot:
The best part was of course the ending. The story plot moved in a typical manner showing the events and characters in a true life fashion and events which are of a real life depiction. I was able to in my minds eye see this story vividly and in detail..

Rhythm:
I was wondering where all of this was going for a while but kept reading and it was worth the reading wait, nice surprise. Things move along nicely and reading your story did not create any boredom or feelings of having to much through it to get to the ending.

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My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
they may be snow on the top but... there
until I sussed each offering was guessed
when listened to it all alone. I

*Thought* CONCLUSION(S) *Thought*

My thoughts and Impressions:
What stood out the most of course was the twist in the ending of your word art.
Thank you for sharing your story and allowing me to review for you.
Safe travels and many blessings.

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