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| (5.0)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Dear Lord A must read for me. Description: written on 21 September 2015 any significance to this date?  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: I like that although you wrote a poem, you also wrote a prayer as you prayed to God above with your heartfelt love and shared how you felt and were struggling. Yes certainly I can relate to this. And, I'm thankful for you and your poem with your prayer shared for all readers to be blessed as they decide.. plot: Great plot for there is so much of both sides of things because of the necessity of balance and also that God does not take sides. He is no respecter of persons. Everything has a purpose and he knows the beginning from the end. You in your own way pointed this out in your poem, much thanks. Rhythm: For me the rhythm was smooth and easy to follow in your poem. I had no trouble following where you were leading.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: I noticed you used some word forms for which I was unfamiliar yet t i understood your meanings. I am glad to have been introduced to them, much thanks.  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Much thanks for the blessings you gifted to me through your word art. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with readers. Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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