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Title:
Pondering I wonder what is within this word art?
Description:
This is purely dialogue. A style I was interested in trying. I'm rather proud of this one.
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What and why:
Well, my writing friend, let me ponder for a while.

I enjoyed the entire writing, however for the very best part was the line:
"“old friend. Let me ponder that.”"
I couldn't help but to laugh and laughter is good medicine. Much thanks for the laugh.

plot:
The plot set in conversation was very interesting and kept my attention so I was content to ponder as I read. This did give much food for thought or rather pondering.

Rhythm:
For me there was no trouble reading your word art. I had a very smooth pondering through out the entire scene writing was as if someone was actually speaking the words.

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How's the pondering going er the writing?

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As I read your story presented through conversation only, I did pause to consider some of the remarks and through about the pondering of the situation.

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My thoughts and Impressions:
Pondering can be a useful exercise, having read this conversation, I must ponder the deep meaning of said situation, especially in regards to the last line, my favorite, again thank you for the laugh.
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