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 | Courage  [13+] Courage will keep me standing and I will not let others destroy my walls.  |
| (4.5)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Courage Description: Courage will keep me standing and I will not let others destroy my walls. Walls for safety or for solitude or for something else?  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: One cannot be courageous without the pain and agony of the world. This is so very, very true. Opposites are necessary or we would have nothing to compare and little understanding, thank you for pointing this out in your word art. plot: Wow, this writing is deep and complex with many possible possibilities beyond the written word. Rhythm: I did;t have any trouble with reading however, the content caused me to pause at times and take a little more time to process what was conveyed through the twists and turns of the struggles detailed in this poem.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S) I hope all is well and working out nicely for you. With this situation presented in your poem I got the feeling that this is only swimming the surface of these events and that there is much more to this than written. Hope is something which can keep us going and it seems it helped you. How are things going?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: The light dim then brighter is the hope and safety but what exactly was the other part of this? Was this terror and fear and hurt driven by the opposite of the light, or was it something else? Could it have been family or friends driven by darkness, lack of understanding or some other force?  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Thank you very much for sharing your word art and allowing me to review for you. Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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