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 Review #4401987 |
 | Snow White Dove  [E] A emotional and nature poem.  |
| (5.0)  Hello T.L.Finch This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is truly a beautiful poem. Doves were mine and my husband's meaningful, spiritual and loving mascot during our 35 yrs. Butterflies have a lot of meaning for me also. I truly enjoyed the way you penned this piece, asking the reader to get involved with the words and actually think and meditate on them, not just scan over the words. I wrote a prose piece quite a while back called, Have you ever wondered? which this writing reminded me of.  There's nothing like seeing pure white doves fly high over-head. It's really an awe-inspiring site! Title and Description - Your title is of course what grabbed my attention. That along with the description lured me right in to read this very nice piece.  Characters - I absolutely adore and relish in nature and all the creatures within. You chose some magnificent creatures to add to each stanza. There was no forced lines, rhymes or flow. Each line read beautifully and smoothly, along with each stanza following the previous. Nice job!  Setting - You painted the setting with your words. You brought the beauty you were writing about along with the emotion, to allow the reader get absorbed through your piece.  What I like about your piece - I loved your whole poem and thought you did a nice job with its' completion. But the third stanza really stood out to me in its beauty and creativity: Does anyone know where elephants die, in secret graveyards as the east winds sigh?  Suggestions - I'm sorry but I really do not have any. Enjoyed it immensely, just as it is now.  Thank you so much for sharing your piece with us!  KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Tracey  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 03/25/2018 @ 7:31pm EDT