Hello Pamela



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

A good title, it works well with the poem. And it lived up to my expectations. There is a good study rhythm. It has a good flow to it. However, by adding some punctuation it would flow better. Also not every line has to be capitalized.

There is depth and meaning to your poem. It is interesting. It contains emotion and has great imagery. I can relate to your poem. I like how everything turned upside down in your life and you found the strength and courage to over come it. And with positive thoughts of making it better.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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