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 | Praised At Passover  [E] (Based on the book of John, chapters eleven and twelve.)  |
| (4.5)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Praised At Passover Definitely caught my attention because of what I suspected may be written. Description: (Based on the book of John, chapters eleven and twelve.) A for sure must read.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: Telling this story in poetry form is wonderful. I like all of it from beginning to end and hope that more readers will find this and take it all into the depths of their soul and ponder and meditate upon these words. plot: The greatest plot of salvation ever written and now, rewritten in poetry form for many readers to to read and learn from is valuable and worth taking the time to review. Rhythm: This was very nicely written with apparently well chosen words to go along with this story as written in scripture. The words flowed smoothly and I was not distracted from the story.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: At this time, the Passover festival was at hand, At this time, with Passover festival at hand, When I read this sentence it seemed to me to be a bit rough. Changing the wording so that it fits better with the rest of the poem should smooth the reading. My suggestion may fit ok however it is an idea for you to consider.  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Your poem put a joyful song in my heart. I really enjoyed the reading experience. Much thanks for sharing your word art with me. Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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