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Your first verse sure caught my attention. It made me wonder how many millions of people throughout the world might have that problem.

On the upside, if he/she is with the bottle, they're not in jail.

The 'Sunday best' worn to a bar or tavern? This person definitely needs help. It's a god line, well done and hits a person

I take it the nineteen dollars is the cost of the bottle of booze. I just didn't quite understand the 'never to rest'. Is that about the black eyes? I can picture an unshaven man, slept in his clothes; but I don't know about the eyes that must be jerking back and forth? If you could take the time to explain it to me I'd appreciate it.

Thanks for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn

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