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Review of do you see me?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading*Hey David the Dark one! . I'm doing a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR]. I was browsing through your port and came across this piece. It may be a short poem, but the words give a strong impact! Nicely done! *Cool*

*bookstacks2* Title and Description - The title is what really grabbed me. I have one named with the same four words: "Do You See Me?"  [13+]. I wanted to read your piece to see how another poet felt that intimate question. Your description to me is sort of an oxymoron. Because it's not really a simple question which can be answered with a short answer. Do you agree?

*Flower1* Characters - You really made this reader feel the intense emotion of your words. I wasn't expecting the last three lines of your poem, after reading the first three lines. The pain can be sensed right beneath the surface. *Heart*

*Books2* Thanks so much for sharing this powerful short poem with us. I really enjoyed it.

*Quill* KEEP ON WRITING ON! *Quill*

Tracey
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