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 Death of an Ideal  [13+]
The lines of right and wrong used to be so clear...
by Cheri Annemos
Review of Death of an Ideal  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am reviewing your poem as part of the I Write in 2018 activity!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is a profoundly moving free verse poem about questioning the reasoning behind war and destruction.

With free verse, you are free to express without constraints provided with structured poetry.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

Paint your thoughts on the winds of time.
Tears that cannot be shed

That first line especially and the last two lines really bring it home. It is about those unsung heroes who take on the fighting, not on the politicians who cause most of it. Those who think and study know what the truth is. It isn't what is taught to us as children about these wars.

I thought your poem was brilliant.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloonv*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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