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This is a wonderful poem. I like the title Where?

Through the poem the poet questioning about the birds and animals of each season. This poem is about seasons summer, winter, fall and spring. Each season brings different natural beauty. They gives pleasure in our mind, cherish your heart. You used Flowers, birds, butterflies, rabbit to create the mood of the poem.

Every stanza has the rhyme scheme of x, a, x, a. Rhyming makes this poem more interesting and brighter. The tone I find this poem is soothing. The flow is spontaneous.

I enjoyed your poem.

Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.

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