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 The Importance of Preparation  [E]
Personal experiences discovering why it is important to prepare for every situation
by clementkelsey
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC clementkelsey ! *Smile*

*Baseball* Wow! This article was amazing and a delight to read. It was well written and coherent and I enjoyed how you wove your early experience into a life lesson for the future. It is often the case but at times we do not see the depth til years later. The connection between that and the hoped for military life is a wonderful example for your theme.*Thumbsup*

I could visualize the game and the attitude of the senior whose heart was really not in the game. The wisdom that eventually came was solid. To see that it is about team and integrity is a valueable realization and one we need to embrace in the world today.

You make your case with details and a logical rationale that supports your opinion effectively. I think it is a convincing peice with a heart-felt tone and an inspiring vision for you and others.

I admire your honesty and sharing that can be a contribution to others. *Starstruck* Keep on writing and being the star you are!

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