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 | The Girl with Silver Bracelets  [E] the girl with the silver bracelets--one of a series of old mermaid poems  |
| (5.0)  Happy Poetry Month Ridinghhood! This whimsical poem was a delight to imagine! The notion of holding onto the silver bracelets as a symbol of youth and dreams and magic is appealing. I enjoyed the image of the elder with the soup and the dreamy rainbows. The muse is ever young! The free flow suits the whimsical content and it was fun to read. I love bracelets myself so I am right there with her.  The vocabulary was thematic and well chosen to create an effective soundscape to be read aloud. I could hear the clink of bracelets and imagine the light captured therein. The consonance and alliteration added to the overall effect of the read.  Thanks for sharing your fanciful and metaphoric vision. A lot to ponder.  eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **
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You responded to this review 04/15/2018 @ 8:32am EDT