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Like Clockwork  [13+]
Orange You Glad You Don't Teach?
by Mastiff
Review of Like Clockwork  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi!Mastiff

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Like Clockwork"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

*Bulletg* WHY I AM REVIEWING THIS ITEM: I saw your name on the list. And I thought I would give your story a read.

*Bulletg* FIRST IMPRESSION: Kevin, you wrote a good story. It reminds me college days, my teachers and friends. I have so many memories with them.
The way you told this story keeps me reading. Your story made me laugh. The tones I find in this story is cheerful, and humorous. I like the descriptions and presentation of your story and the ending.

*Bulletg*SETTING:In modern time.

*Bulletg*CHARACTERS:Well developed. I like the character Vaughn

*Bulletg*STORY: Vaughn tried hard not to not to fall asleep in his language class, but he did fall asleep during lectures .
When asked to comment , he didn’t afraid but answered confidently which makes his teacher amazed. I really like the fact.


*Starg*OVERALL IMPRESSION: Clever story . You told beautifully how you found your way into English Literature 101 studying A Clockwork Orange. I enjoyed it reading.

Happy writing!

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