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Hi! Gypsy Ann

It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I found that you have birthday this month. And I thought I would give your poem a read. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.

First I like the message in this poem. You penned them down beautifully.

A wonderful message in a few words. I love this. I like this poem because it is rich in words. The concept is unique. Your words are very pure and true that we must clear our bad thoughts, tears, and pain if we want to go forward. The tone of this poem is filled with hope.

Although the poem speaks of self help, I feel this poem is simple, positive.

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