Hello Mastiff



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

An interesting piece. It has a nice flow, the plot moved along at a good pace. I had to give a laugh at the end because the same would happen to me. I could see the story unfold as I read. Good description about the setting.

A suggestion, give some physical description about your main characters and through in a character flaw, like a limp or running his hands through his hair. It makes your character more real and believable.

Thank you for sharing. I liked your story.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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