Hello Mastiff



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

A short piece, nicely written. The title works well with the story. This would make a good story. If this piece only required 100 words great job of getting the point across.

Description of setting and lots more about the main character would make this piece really rock.

I like the story line and the way it is written.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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