Hello Humming Bird



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

An interesting poem. The title works well with this piece, it lives up to my expectations of the poem. There is a good rhythm. Each line flows nicely into the next line. And I noticed some rhyming.

This piece has beauty and depth. I like how you describe each color. and I agree with you about the color black, it has strength.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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