Hello Henny Penny



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

A very sad story, but true for some. My heart sank and I felt like crying for this poor soul. At least in the end she had some happiness.

I love the title, it works well for this story. The plot moves at a good pace and has great imagery. Normally I would suggest more character description, but I don't think this story could handle anymore sadness.

I do have one suggestion,
she waits for someone to hold her Capitalize the "s" in She.

Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading your story.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .