Hello T.L. Finch



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Wow! What a sad poem, you wrote a lot of emotion into this piece. There is also good imagery. I feel there is power and depth in this poem. It is well written.

I noticed the rhyming scheme, good job it's hard to tell a story and make it rhyme. Or at least it is for me. The rhythm moves at a good quick pace. And each line flows nicely into the net line. The title fits the poem.

I have no suggestions to offer. Great job.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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