Hello CJ



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Silently waiting
Watching us
These lines are creepy, I never thought of trees doing this, and I'm a tree huger. Anyway, I love these lines.

The title is amazing, it fits the poem and also pulls in the reader. Again I never had these thoughts about trees. There is power and beauty and depth to this poem.

You ask a lot of questions here which I thinks pulls from the rhythm and flow. It's kind of choppy. Please remember these are my opinions, you are the creator. Also the word "they" is used quit a bit.

There is good imagery here. I can see the trees watching and whispering among themselves.

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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