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 To My Children  [E]
This is a letter to "my children" for the Merit Badge Project.
by very thankful
Review of To My Children  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "To My Children"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army"  for April review challenge.

First I want to say you Happy Birthday as I saw your name on birthday list.

This is a beautiful gratitude letter for pets. You have shown some of the many reason you are thankful for them. You named your pets as Josette, Maggie and Rocky and you called them "my children" . I like the thoughts.

You wrote this beautifully for the Merit Badge Project with limited word counts and it’s look great. Yes, pets are the greatest friends of men especially the dogs. They are so caring and loving. Unfortunately, I have no pets to write about their stories. Because I do not have enough space in my apartment building to take care of them. But I always feel to have a pet dog. *Dog1*

They give us emotional support. From this letter I learned that Maggie rescued you when you get through seizures.

I like the way you put your feelings into words. Your letter expressed how a mother feel about her children. I think Josette, Maggie and Rocky would be happy if they could read your letter. And they could understand how amazing and wonderful their mother is.

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed it.


Happy Birthday!!

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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