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 Winter haiku.  [E]
Prompt was winter. Second place tie.
by Kotaro
Review of Winter haiku.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on "Read and Review" on the left side of the page and it took me to your Winter haiku.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* You have captured something about winter - it is an exhausting time for anyone challenged with physical limitations. I am not sure if that was your intention or it's just the baggage I bring to my reading at an advanced age.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* To me, the first haiku conveys a mood of exhaustion, the second one more determination to forge ahead. To me broken snow conveys that some walking has gone on - frozen more that a trek or journey lies ahead.

I prefer the second, although winter does totally exhaust and defeat me at times. I took the second one as a burst of energy and the first as someone on their last steps.

I thought both were brilliant and it is amazing what changing up a few words can do to a mood and sense of what is conveyed.

I enjoyed reading this very much.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow* *Tornado* *Tulipp*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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