This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

FIRST IMPRESSION:This is interesting story about animal, beautifully written with the prompt. I especially like the ending. You wrote it from personal experience and its look great.

THE STORY: This is a story of a kid and his Stage show in Shakespearean Play. Your story tells that how difficult it was for you to make your dog an actor.

CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. You crafted them so beautifully.

SUGGESTION:Though I am not expert in grammar but I found some mistakes
-“I went on for awhile,” you need a space between “a” and “while”
- both well known and obscure you need a hyphen between word “well” and “known”

FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

Mina