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Hi! Monty

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army"  for April Challenge.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: A wonderful poem about seasons of life. I like this thoughtful poem. I like the way you painted our life beautifully. I admire every word choice.

*BurstP* THE POEM: Each seasons brings different looks and beauty. We should embrace them as we can’t stop the aging process. When we grew old we reminisce on our old good days. Which reflects in your poem.

*BurstP* RHYTHM: Every stanza has the rhyme scheme of X, A, X, A. Rhyming makes this poem more interesting. It makes the rhythm faster, happier, and brighter. The tone I find this poem is soothing.

*BurstP* FAVOURITE:
For a lot of years I’ve wandered,
Through the seasons warm and cold,
With each one to move more quickly,
On this road to growing old.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: Thanks for sharing your awesome work with us. I enjoyed it reading.

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