It's been a pleasure to review your poem"Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC.

Good poem about aging. You painted beautifully about the true reality of life. I like the way you painted it. Your words are very true.

You told beautifully what physical change come with aging. First our vision change, our hair start falling, we have difficulty to memorize a thing, we have difficulty in hearing. I like this poem because it shows the true fact of life and the positive side of the phenomenon. Which you told by these lines

“You’re hoping time will stall.
So you have the chance.
To say good bye to all.
Enjoy your last dance.“

Thanks for sharing your work with us. It's pleasure to read your poem. Good luck for the contest.