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Hi!meghan

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.

You did good job write down your feelings. I think sometimes writing reduces our stress. People fall in love, People break up. It's a common phenomenon of life. But we should embrace it to move on, to feel the beat of every moment.
I could feel the sadness laced in this piece. I like the way you are telling your story.

This piece is so interesting because of the desire of the speakers for something to happen. I like the endings of your story and the positive thought
“Maybe someday I will get over this stupid infatuation, but for now, I wallow in self-pity because you don't feel the same.”

Hope you find the courage to drive the situation.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

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