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| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Untitled This is a challenge and I'm attracted to challenges. Description: Working on a title? Why not jump in and let's see what we can come up with for a title befitting this poem, ok with you? I'm in for the duration.   FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: ONCE UPON A LONG TIME AGO This is a good way to explain the passage of time and give an age to the character I LIVED IN MUD AND GREW IN SNOW Either this is swamp land or it is a place where it rains a lot I REMAIN TODAY WHERE I STAND Trees remain where they start to grow , this is a good clue. TO TOWER ABOVE THE BARREN LAND The height of the character and relationship to the land gives more detail about the character in this poem. I can imagine there may be a chance of this writing being about something other than a tree, however everything in this word art points to the character being a tree. The entire poem is relaxing and offers clues about the character. It is short and concise. While reading it I felt like calm and beauty were close friends. plot: The story about a tree written in a small package makes the importance of the tree stand out for me. The history of the tree is easy to understand and has no fluff which I appreciate. Rhythm: The stanzas all worked well together and reading this word art was easy and a pleasant experience. title Guardian Tree I like this idea because several years ago during a major thunder storm a mature magnificent Pin Oak tree saved my home because it took a lightning hit because it towered over the house. I was very grateful for the tree saving my home. After several tree experts looked at the tree they all told men that the tree would not survive. Didn't listen to them and encouraged the tree to stay alive. It thrived. I've mored so do not know how it is doing now. The Tree Soldier Giants Among Us Natures Guardian  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Reading your poem was an uplifting and enjoyable experience. Thank you for sharing this with me, readers and reviewers. Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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