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 |  | Shadow Prints  [E] This poem is about my little girl, Shadow.  |
| (5.0)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Shadow Prints The title caused me to think dog, so of course anything dog is a must read for me. Description: This poem is about my little girl, Shadow. You have a little girl dog in poetry who I would like to meet, so decided to read your story written in poem form.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: The way your love for Shadow shows through your poem. She is always close to me She knows what to do Shadow seems to be an intelligent and devoted friend. This for me is the best possible friendship situation because dogs do not judge. My service dog, Bella has been diagnosed with lymphoma so this word art is a mixture of happiness for you and Shadow and sadness for me because Bells has this medical issue, is an older dog, and I'm not sure how much longer we will be together. A furry nudge is a familiar touchthis reminds me of Bella waking me in the morning. I think this dog behavior is part of natures way for mother dogs to stir their pups to be awake and active in their environment. plot: The relationship between a loved dog and human is for always a great story, no matter the form. Rhythm: Reading your poem for me brought to life the friendship you two have and reminded me of Bella and our friendship. I had no trouble understanding the information presented and could visualize the actions written about in vivid color. The stanzas worked well together and reading your word art was a smooth and enjoyable experience. Character Shadow seems to be a devoted and in turn with you canine companion/fury friend and family member. Picture You painter a wonderful picture through your word art of a fantastic relationship between you and your dog. A good addition to this poem would be to have a picture uploader to this poem.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Thank you for sharing about your fury family member. I enjoyed getting to know both of you through this poem. Reading and reviewing your word was for me like finding a new friend and getting to know them. Much thanks for writing this story and sharing it with me, readers, and reviewers. Safe travels and many blessing.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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