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| (5.0)| Hi!kamoonpuri It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" This is beautiful poem about nature. I like the image and symbol you have used here. You metaphorically compared the natural object with human nature. “ As delicate as butterflies/As mysterious as the mist./As whimsical as the weather or your toddler/As heartwarming as an amiable smile/ As furious as a hissing feline/Fluttering hearts as in butterflies in your tummy” I love that combination. I like the way you painted our life beautifully. The words are very true. The last four lines are my favorite. It packed with message. The tones I find in this poem is soothing. I feel this poem is simple and beautiful.   Mina   ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 04/24/2018 @ 5:22am EDT