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Title:
Our World the title must be about our world so why not see what view is with in these words.
Description:
The earth really is our only home This is true from the physical point of view.

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What and why:
The idea of defending the earth and showing all the destruction we humans bring to bare on the earth is a subject which more people should be aware of and want to change for the better.

plot:
The earth truly is the only place where we can live that I'm aware of without any artificial helps, and live in the normal way we are accustomed to enjoying. At the panel of the earth then why would we humans be so destructive? We ravage this earth and expect to have a healthy long life with freedoms and adventures, while this earth is beaten and abused. Your word evoked these ideas as I read your words.

Rhythm:
The sentences and stanzas flowed nicely and I had no trouble understanding and visualizing the word pictures you were presenting.

Character(s)
The humans versus the earth are believable because of the ability of humans to ravage, pilute, and destroy our earth. The earth is to a great extent at our mercy.

Conflict
Human kind is ruthless against nature and earth while the earth and nature are trying to survive.

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My thoughts and Impressions:
Thank you for sharing your word art with me and allowing me to review for you. The challenging issues of humans versus nature and earth are vast. I appreciate your word art showing some of this in your word art.

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