Hello CJ



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Welcome to WDC.

Lets start with the title, a great strong title it works well with the poem. It captured my attention and drew me in. The tag line helps captivate the reader. It lives up to my expectations of the poem.

There is a good rhythm moving the story line along at a good pace. Each line flows nicely into the next line. The imagery is wonderful. I can see the story unfold as I read. I like how there are two thoughts in the poem. This piece has power and depth.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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