Hello BlueBear007



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Welcome to WDC.

Great story, I had to laugh. I have two cats and five dogs I understand completely.

The title pulled me in to read your story. It started out a little slow for me. I feel the second paragraph slows the story down. The story line moves at a great pace. And I could see the story unfold as I read.
I feel this short piece is well written.

I do have a suggestion:
My sweetheart was done work . . . done at work or done with work, something is missing here.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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