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 Caverns  [E]
The richest veins always run deeper
by Logan
Review of Caverns  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Title:
Caverns The title caught my attention because this word was at the top of each page.
Description:
The richest veins always run deeperNow, this description did catch my attention because I wanted to know what was in and about the deep richest veins.

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What and why:
The rhythm of this work was steady and constant. Describing the veins brought a visual of being able to venture into this special environment.

plot:
The richest veins running deeper and having unique and interesting characteristics made this poem interesting and kept my attention.

Rhythm:
I had no trouble finding the rhythm of this work and was able to follow it through out the poem.

Reading
For me reading this word art was challenging because the blue font against the while background was difficult to see and read. I considered how I might be able to change this however, as far as I know there are no options with in WDC to change the font for easier readability.

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Font color was a challenge for me to read.

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My thoughts and Impressions:
Thank you for sharing this poem and allowing me to review for you. It was well written and vivid.
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