THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Caverns The title caught my attention because this word was at the top of each page. Description: The richest veins always run deeperNow, this description did catch my attention because I wanted to know what was in and about the deep richest veins. FIRST IMPRESSIONS I LIKE What and why: The rhythm of this work was steady and constant. Describing the veins brought a visual of being able to venture into this special environment. plot: The richest veins running deeper and having unique and interesting characteristics made this poem interesting and kept my attention. Rhythm: I had no trouble finding the rhythm of this work and was able to follow it through out the poem. Reading For me reading this word art was challenging because the blue font against the while background was difficult to see and read. I considered how I might be able to change this however, as far as I know there are no options with in WDC to change the font for easier readability. OBSERVATION(S) QUESTION(S) SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: Font color was a challenge for me to read. CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Thank you for sharing this poem and allowing me to review for you. It was well written and vivid. Safe travels and many blessings. HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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