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Review of A Place to Retire  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A very inspiring very enjoyable poem!

Your poem did interest me and you rhymed this poem very well. Your poem was believable. And the dialog flowed naturally.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most was your description of where you would like to retire in your poem. What stood out was the way you rhymed this poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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