A very inspiring poem, Mary Ann!

Your plot interested me, Yes, your characters were believable, and your dialog flowed naturally.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together very well.

I like the way you rhymed this poem most. There was nothing I disliked about your poem? "She is my rose my beauty queen" is what stood out the most for me.

A very nice and beautiful poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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