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 A Call to Duty  [E]
"...A call to duty will make things right, and bring poor folks a day so bright!"
by Tim Chiu
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Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A very inspiring poem!

Yes, your plot interests me and the characters believable. Plus your dialog flowed naturally for me.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most about your poem was your rhyming stanzas. there was nothing I liked least about your poem. Yes, your poem did stand out. A very well written poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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