Hello Vicki



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Yes most people can relate. Your poem has a good rhyme scheme. The rhythm moves the poem at a good pace. Also good imagery. I could see the story unfold as I read. The title is almost good. It pulls in the reader because it holds mystery.

My only suggestion is with the title, finish the word visit and also capitalize the letters of all the words.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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