Hello Daniel Kohnen



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Great poem. There is power and depth to it. And the title is intriguing. You have woven both imagery and emotion into your poem, which are important.The rhythm has a good flow, and each line flows nicely into the next line. Well written and good word selection.

The world believes to be smart.

Does not count the broken heart!

The world uses us as soulless guard.

Makes us count that we're taking part,

In this madness! This journey of destruction,

Through ignoring the warning about global warming!
My favorite stanza. It offers imagery, emotion as well as truth.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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