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Sliding Down the Air  [E]
sometims we must rewrite our life
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Based on a television series on BBC/Netflix



*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen, and it took me to your fine poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This poem is free verse and it has a message that most will be able to identify with. Do any of us really make a difference? It is hard to say. We all might want to do something differently, if given the option. When we write, we can go places we otherwise would never venture out to. The imagery is very vivid - we all slide down to some extent. If we didn't, it would get quite bumpy along the way.

I think that all your words are very carefully chose and that part about being a nurse there really brought a tear to my eye. I think there is a lot of caring and maybe self deprecation conveyed. It sounds like a lot is being done to me.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

At the end of the reading, this was the part that stays with me:

"Sometimes we might
rewrite our lives
to sleep at night."

Indeed.

I thought it was all brilliant and the words were eloquent and well-chosen - nicely done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloonr**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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