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by A Guest Visitor
Review of Daily Incitation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the page and it took me to your fine poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that this is a good message to not take anything for granted in life and to find ways to be positive about things every single day. Some days are definitely better than others, but the challenges are what keep us on our toes or hooves.

In the 4th stanza up from the end you have the word "their". In this context it should be either "they are" or "they're"*Checkg*

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"I will stay in the present,
And love the ones I have.
Every moment lived,
is a moment I will never get back."

This is a great thing to remind ourselves of every day.

Very positive poem that affirms that life is for the living and each day is a true gift.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such
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