*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4412076
Review #4412076
Viewing a review of:
 Long Long Time Ago  [E]
Long Long Time Ago by T. J. Shemaly How thoughts of poetry process in my mind.
by SeanFear
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Your poem was inspiring!

Yes, your plot interested me in this poem, your characters were believable, Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me.

Yes, the time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

There's nothing I would change about your poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 05/09/2018 @ 8:09am EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4412076